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Smut Marathon – Round 4 Musings

Smut Marathon – Round 4 Musings

I really loved this round! It was an assignment we all knew how to do and that was clear in the resulting entries, which were all sizzling hot! The assignment was to write an erotic masturbation scene, with one character, one unbranded toy and a maximum of 300 words. I will admit, initially, when the entries went live I was a bit annoyed with myself. I had thought one character meant we couldn’t reference anyone else throughout the whole piece of writing. I feel like I could have created an entry that stood out more, had I only bloody asked what the one character limit meant! Regardless, a skilled and creative writer could have done something a lot more out of the box than I managed.

This was my entry:


10) The Private Show

The scene was set. The full-length mirror stood waiting at the end of the bed, a steel beaded dildo shimmered with lubricant and Clarissa was in a pose that revealed every crevice of intimate flesh in the mirror’s reflection. There she was no longer Clarissa, she was the cam model of her sexual dreams. The one her unaroused self would never consider allowing her to be: The mirror was the camera and she was the star of her own porn show.

With one hand clutching the dildo, her other teasingly explored her body. Fingertips grazing her widespread thighs and dancing over every curve as they made their way to her blushing nipples. Biting her plump lower lip, Clarissa pinched, rolled, grabbed and massaged her breasts until her cunt began to glisten in the reflective glass. With moans of pleasure saved only for her private shows, her fingers stroked her cunt, spreading the slippery fluid over every yearning fold.

Clarissa took the cool, metal dildo and slowly stroked it over her labia, following the wet path to her ass. As it naturally dipped into her body, she forced the smallest steel bead in, her asshole stretching then clasping at the hard metal. Her other hand vigorously rubbed her clit, sliding over the desperate flesh as her cunt began to soak her, liquid dripping down the crevice of her body to the dildo between her spread cheeks. Pressing on the steel, her ass stretched to take in a larger bead, making her call out incoherently in appreciative pain. The resulting orgasm thundered through every nerve of her body. Intense pulsations that forced the dildo out of her body. Clarissa watched her reflection intently, taking in every throbbing movement of her cunt and every drip of creamy fluid.

That was quite a show.


Almost immediately after submitting I could see its flaws. Where did I mention what Clarissa was feeling? What was she thinking? Why was she in the mood for fun? The one-character scenario wasn’t the problem, the way I wrote it was.

I actually received quite little feedback. But in this case, I’m not sure it was necessary as I could clearly see where I had gone wrong.

The Knockout

Somehow I managed to scrape through another knockout round and I couldn’t be more grateful! I can now say I’ve reached the level of the Smut Marathon I hoped I would when I signed up for it. Who knows, maybe if I really try I could even make it through the next knockout round too. I’m certainly going to give it my best shot!

My Favourites

This was one of the hardest rounds for me to choose just 2 to vote for (my other vote goes on my own entry). These are the entries that I loved most, but there really were so many other great ones!

  • Open-Door Policy by Mike Bruno
  • Punished…Mew Pfft Pfft by Kitt Wolf
  • The Scent of Them by Cara Thereon
  • Ready For You by Ella Scandal
  • Please Let Me by Stella Kinkk

Before I leave I want to link to a Twitter thread that very accurately sums up my feelings in regards to the Smut Marathon and the hard work of those that are making it possible. I’d also like to add something about feedback -Those that leave it don’t personally gain anything from the time and effort they put in, leaving everyone feedback takes me hours to do. So whether we agree with the feedback, or not, I think we should at least be grateful that there are people that care enough about our writing to support us and want to try to help us.

That being said, I will attempt to improve my feedback abilities so I can help everyone as much as possible.

And finally, I highly recommend looking out for the next voting round on June 3rd! The current assignment is so much fun, for both writing and reading!

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3 Comments

  1. I feel the same about the feedback aspect. People are trying to leave feedback, but it may be difficult considering the number of entries. Leaving detailed critique or any at all is thoughtful when many don’t have to do so. You’ve done so well! And I really love your attitude the whole way

  2. I am so happy that you have enjoyed the fourth round of the Smut Marathon and that you are through to the next. Also, thank you for your remark in the end, about feedback, because this is so true. People indeed take the time to sit down and do some feedback, so if only for that, people should be grateful 🙂

    On to the next round!

    Rebel xox

  3. It’s great to see that you already saw what was lacking in your story. Erotica is often about what is going on between the ears, rather than between the legs.

    Hope to see much more of you in the next rounds!

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